you and the water

April 3, 2013 at 1:39 am 9 comments

up early before the sun rises

standing over the body of water,

waiting

tension running thru her body, soon to be erased

tension running thru her body, soon to be power

as she enters the body of energy

feeling one with mind, body & soul

all cares are forgotten, troubles are gone

reborn in the maker’s fountain

held once again.

∞

Ironman Wisconsin 2006

Ironman Wisconsin 2006

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9 Comments Add your own

  • 1. WB  |  April 3, 2013 at 1:47 am

    You couldn’t have wrote a better poem to describe that photo. Excellent.

    Reply
    • 2. words4jp  |  April 3, 2013 at 2:06 am

      thank you:)

      Reply
      • 3. WB  |  April 3, 2013 at 2:30 am

        You’re welcome.

  • 4. yolonce12  |  April 3, 2013 at 10:49 am

    Very nice piece … πŸ™‚

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    • 5. words4jp  |  April 3, 2013 at 10:55 am

      thank you very much:)

      Reply
  • 6. A  |  April 3, 2013 at 7:20 pm

    Inspiring piece πŸ™‚

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    • 7. words4jp  |  April 3, 2013 at 7:38 pm

      thank you very much:)

      Reply
  • 8. Rebecca Zenker  |  April 4, 2013 at 3:40 pm

    I love that pic! You look great πŸ™‚

    Reply
    • 9. words4jp  |  April 4, 2013 at 3:44 pm

      seems like centuries ago:)

      Reply

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