searching for…

April 17, 2014 at 2:23 pm 10 comments

a shower of tears

bathing amongst lies and fears

drowning in one’s head

reaching for something to grasp

swimming toward salvation

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lakewood

a bird house amidst the prairie

Lakewood Forest Preserve

Lake County, IL

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10 Comments Add your own

  • 1. thehappyhugger  |  April 17, 2014 at 2:27 pm

    Great writing. Love the photo.

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    • 2. words4jp  |  April 17, 2014 at 5:24 pm

      thank you so much:)

      Reply
  • 3. Kirsten  |  April 17, 2014 at 5:37 pm

    I love how you capture moments!

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    • 4. words4jp  |  April 17, 2014 at 5:52 pm

      thank you. you are quite the moment catcher yourself:) xx

      Reply
  • 5. Dom DiFrancesco  |  April 17, 2014 at 5:39 pm

    Such a sad piece with such a beautiful picture. Great work my friend.

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    • 6. words4jp  |  April 17, 2014 at 5:43 pm

      thank you – ironically, though it is sad, it is not – i believe we all have a life raft(s) out there – we have to keep searching for it. right? xx

      Reply
  • 7. findingmyinnercourage  |  April 17, 2014 at 5:43 pm

    Both writing and photo are beautiful because of “who” they represent.

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    • 8. words4jp  |  April 17, 2014 at 5:53 pm

      thank you so much. xx

      Reply
  • 9. hastywords  |  April 17, 2014 at 8:20 pm

    Perfectly said. Full of desperation and full of the most wonderful hope!

    Reply

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