April 29, 2014 at 4:48 pm 16 comments



always running far away

hiding oneself in vain

never facing the monsters

the road has crumpled

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  • 1. hitandrun1964  |  April 29, 2014 at 5:07 pm

    Ya gotta stand up to the monsters, wave them forward and yell, “Bring it,” then fight…you’ll have Pee by your side…sleeping, of course, but there nonetheless.

    • 2. words4jp  |  April 29, 2014 at 6:10 pm

      she can sleep through anything but the BBB’s, of course.

  • 3. Morgan  |  April 29, 2014 at 5:28 pm

    Sooner or later everything catches up with you….is this what you’re saying???

    • 4. words4jp  |  April 29, 2014 at 6:09 pm

      yes, evading things that should have been dealt with and put to rest that never were and then they spring up. after many years, they are no longer little things, they become big things.

      • 5. Morgan  |  April 29, 2014 at 7:58 pm

        The flea in the closet becomes the elephant in the room 😉

      • 6. words4jp  |  April 29, 2014 at 9:39 pm

        More like a herd of elephants. 😉

  • 7. From Acorn To Oak  |  April 29, 2014 at 7:37 pm

    What stops you from just turning around, hands on hips and asking why they think they can outwit you and believe they are stronger than you???? Remember the big hat and the puffed out chest when you stand up!!! XXX Good luck! 🙂

    • 8. words4jp  |  April 29, 2014 at 9:42 pm

      I will take this under advisement. 😉

  • 9. WB  |  April 29, 2014 at 9:17 pm

    Like it.

    • 10. words4jp  |  April 29, 2014 at 9:42 pm

      Thank you. Thank you for reading and thank you for commenting.

      • 11. WB  |  April 29, 2014 at 9:43 pm


  • 12. Kirsten  |  April 29, 2014 at 9:31 pm

    We will fight the monsters together…standing back to back with our swords drawn!! xoxo

    • 13. words4jp  |  April 29, 2014 at 9:43 pm

      I think I may need heavier artillery;). Got some grenades? Light sabers? Oh wait, I got those – if I can pry them away from the boys. 🙂

  • 14. Raven Whyte  |  May 2, 2014 at 6:00 am

    always running
    trying to get away
    then realizing
    there is no
    and the problems are still there
    when you slow down
    to catch your breath

    • 15. words4jp  |  May 4, 2014 at 2:59 am

      You write the most beautiful poetic commentary. I am honored.

      • 16. Raven Whyte  |  May 4, 2014 at 4:54 am

        I am both honoured and glad that you do not feel offended when i do it! 🙂
        The words just come to me, they always have, but for years people said I was just trying to ‘one up’ them, and all I knew was that those were the words I found when I heard/saw their words.

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