fading…

May 31, 2014 at 1:35 pm 11 comments

no more does she see

the life inside which once thrived

fading into waves

IMG_7659

Campus Lake

photograph taken by my son Jordan

Southern Illinois University

Entry filed under: depression, feelings, haiku, human nature, life, Personal, photo prompt, poetry, ponderings, reflections, Relationships, thoughts, time, writing. Tags: , , , , , , , , .

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11 Comments Add your own

  • 1. InfiniteZip  |  May 31, 2014 at 1:50 pm

    Beautiful my friend:)

    Reply
  • 3. dererzahlernc  |  May 31, 2014 at 3:23 pm

    Beautifully said.

    Reply
    • 4. words4jp  |  May 31, 2014 at 3:26 pm

      Thank you so very much for reading.

      Reply
      • 5. dererzahlernc  |  May 31, 2014 at 3:29 pm

        You’re welcome

  • 6. PookyH  |  June 1, 2014 at 12:19 am

    I am always amazed at your capacity to make me *really* think with so few words. I hope you’re okay? I’m not sure you are? x

    Reply
  • 7. Dom DiFrancesco  |  June 1, 2014 at 1:29 am

    Just beautiful, this applies to so many things. 🙂

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    • 8. words4jp  |  June 1, 2014 at 2:50 am

      I believe it does 😉

      Reply
  • 9. Kirsten  |  June 3, 2014 at 4:50 pm

    The picture combined with your words…exquisite. I’m not sure what those things are in the lake, but the way each one looks lower in the water echoes perfectly with your poem.

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    • 10. words4jp  |  June 3, 2014 at 4:55 pm

      asked Jordan the same question – he said they are barriers – or were once upon a time to mark the shore. they look really cool.

      Reply
      • 11. Kirsten  |  June 3, 2014 at 5:08 pm

        well the picture worked really well!

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