eloquent lyricism

July 24, 2014 at 7:39 pm 26 comments

ξ

ξ

like a bow caressing the strings of a violin,

you have touched my heart

with

the melody of your words

~

such music enraptures and inspires my spirit ~

like a lifeline of hope

~

tethered

to

my

soul

ξ

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the setting sun

the setting sun on July 23, 2014

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head clutter summer hangin’

26 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Mytwosentences  |  July 24, 2014 at 7:47 pm

    Beautiful.

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  • 2. words4jp  |  July 24, 2014 at 8:09 pm

    thank you so very much. 🙂

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  • 3. Mark Baron  |  July 24, 2014 at 8:15 pm

    I love this! And not just because violins are a weakness for me. 😉

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    • 4. words4jp  |  July 24, 2014 at 8:19 pm

      Giselle’s second act pas de deux – music by Adolfe Adam. Second act pas de deux from Swan Lake. Meditation de Thais by Massenet – can be played by violin or cello. Goose bumps.

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      • 5. Mark Baron  |  July 24, 2014 at 8:21 pm

        Indeed…le sigh!

    • 6. words4jp  |  July 24, 2014 at 8:20 pm

      I was listening to these pieces while I wrote this. 🙂

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  • 7. justme792  |  July 24, 2014 at 9:09 pm

    Beautifully written! 🙂

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  • 8. theadventuresofrosebud  |  July 24, 2014 at 9:23 pm

    Absolutely beautiful. I can hear the musicality of your words 🙂

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    • 9. words4jp  |  July 24, 2014 at 9:56 pm

      Thank you sooo much for your words. I am in the middle of composing a symphony – in word form;)

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  • 10. Paul Handover  |  July 24, 2014 at 10:48 pm

    Very beautiful.

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  • 11. MichelleMarie  |  July 24, 2014 at 11:45 pm

    Wow! I love this! Awesome sunset! 😄😄💗❤️

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  • 12. syl65  |  July 25, 2014 at 12:45 am

    This is extremely beautiful. The first line blew me completely away….

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    • 13. words4jp  |  July 25, 2014 at 1:22 am

      Wow, I blew you away? I am honored:). I have been listening to a lot of classical pieces. And I am in the midst of composing a symphony – poetry in a symphonic form. Sound interesting?

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      • 14. syl65  |  July 25, 2014 at 1:43 am

        Sounds very interesting. Composing a symphony? Now that’s awesome!

      • 15. words4jp  |  July 25, 2014 at 3:37 am

        We will see. Words which have the feeling of sound and emotion. I have an overture and the first 2 movements. I still need to write two more movements.

      • 16. syl65  |  July 25, 2014 at 3:47 am

        Will you be posting it here? I would like to see how it turns out.

      • 17. words4jp  |  July 25, 2014 at 3:53 am

        Yes. I post all of my scribbles here. 🙂

      • 18. syl65  |  July 25, 2014 at 4:05 am

        Okay. Look forward to it 🙂

  • 19. drapersmeadow4  |  July 25, 2014 at 2:58 am

    The first line caught my attention (I used to play the violin) and the rest kept it. Just lovely. ~Karen~

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    • 20. words4jp  |  July 25, 2014 at 3:36 am

      Oh my – I am so grateful for your words. My true background and passion is dance and classical music, well they go hand in hand. I find with writing that I am trying to find the link – the spark of inspiration where a thought and feeling come together to create dance or music or a painting. I am trying to compose a symphony at the moment – poetry in 4 part symphonic form. My overture and first two movements have been written. I want the words to feel like the music in rhythm and feel. I must say it is a challenge. But really inspiring. :). Thank you so much.

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      • 21. drapersmeadow4  |  July 25, 2014 at 1:17 pm

        WOW! That sounds absolutely brilliant and difficult – best of luck with finishing it. I look forward to the read. I think that the right words, in the right sequence is musical. They have the power (like music) to stir our soul. All the best. ~Karen~

  • 22. lumar1298  |  July 25, 2014 at 12:08 pm

    Beautiful words…

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  • 23. marcus  |  July 25, 2014 at 2:45 pm

    (((Awhoooo)))

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  • 24. Zara  |  July 25, 2014 at 11:34 pm

    A soulful symphony of words…beautiful:)

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  • 25. Wordifull Melanie  |  July 26, 2014 at 6:54 am

    Ah, so very beautiful…sigh

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    • 26. words4jp  |  July 26, 2014 at 2:47 pm

      Thank you – for me, this is what poetry is…

      Reply

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