i can see clearly…

October 28, 2014 at 2:00 pm 10 comments

when you whisper in my ear,

its as if the whole world

around

me

~ fades ~

and

i am left with nothing

but

this undeniable desire

to become one

with

you

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  • 1. Pamela Beckford  |  October 28, 2014 at 2:05 pm

    Reblogged this on Poetry by Pamela and commented:
    Ahhhh. Lovely words

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    • 2. words4jp  |  October 28, 2014 at 6:54 pm

      Thank you so much and thank you so much for the reblog. I am truly honored. xx

      Reply
  • 3. Paul Handover  |  October 28, 2014 at 2:35 pm

    Incredibly beautiful words. Very romantic!

    Reply
    • 4. words4jp  |  October 28, 2014 at 6:56 pm

      in the words of my two sons – cheesy:) thank you – I told the boys I am going for romance – if i want cheese, i will make a pizza:) they prefer pizza.

      Reply
  • 5. syl65  |  October 28, 2014 at 2:47 pm

    These are words that give cause for taking a deep breath.

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    • 6. words4jp  |  October 28, 2014 at 6:57 pm

      thank you:) i suppose all-in-all breathing is a good thing!

      Reply
      • 7. syl65  |  October 28, 2014 at 7:52 pm

        You’re welcome 🙂 yes breathing is a good thing along with the occasional deep sigh.

  • 8. MsTranquility  |  October 28, 2014 at 3:41 pm

    *Sigh*….beautiful poem, Kimberly ♥

    Reply
    • 9. words4jp  |  October 28, 2014 at 6:57 pm

      thank you very much:)

      Reply
      • 10. MsTranquility  |  October 28, 2014 at 9:50 pm

        You’re welcome ♥

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