hitchhiking

January 16, 2015 at 3:21 pm 19 comments

let’s hitch a ride on a moon beam,

take a spin around the stars.

we can cruise with a comet,

go tanning by the sun

or

hang out in the Milky Way

all night long

~ because ~

it doesn’t matter where we go,

what we do

or what we see,

just

as long as we’re hangin’ together,

there is nowhere else i would rather be.

dedicated

to jordy

who cringes at my poetic cheese

x o x o

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under the stars real gibberish

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  • 1. Brenda Davis Harsham  |  January 16, 2015 at 3:56 pm

    LOL What yummy poetic cheese! At least gouda, my favorite.

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    • 2. words4jp  |  January 16, 2015 at 4:21 pm

      We parmesan – asiago fans around here;). My son said ‘please not Nother piece about leaves and love,…” 😉

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      • 3. Brenda Davis Harsham  |  January 16, 2015 at 4:42 pm

        LOL My children are still young enough to like my poetry. Bless their little hearts.

      • 4. words4jp  |  January 16, 2015 at 4:55 pm

        Jordan is the king of cheesy writing. He has written some stuff that has made me fall off a chair. I told him it takes a writer of cheese to know cheese.

      • 5. Brenda Davis Harsham  |  January 16, 2015 at 5:08 pm

        LOL Do as you please, write some cheese, but make it funny please!

      • 6. words4jp  |  January 16, 2015 at 7:23 pm

        Heheheheheheheheheheheheheheh;)

  • 7. InfiniteZip  |  January 16, 2015 at 4:55 pm

    Have I ever told you how much I adore cheese? Kudos!!!!!💜🍕🍕

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  • 8. Dom DiFrancesco  |  January 16, 2015 at 5:29 pm

    I bet you this one brought him to tears. Very nice and mushy. 🙂

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    • 9. words4jp  |  January 16, 2015 at 7:21 pm

      He sort of stared at me. He will not let me live An Autumn Love Story down – that was the one where two leaves fall in love. Oy.

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  • 10. Paul Handover  |  January 16, 2015 at 5:34 pm

    You have an amazing way with words! Just wonderful.

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    • 11. words4jp  |  January 16, 2015 at 7:16 pm

      Thanks:) my son is a better cheese writer than me. I am trying to follow his lead;)

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  • 12. georgeforfun  |  January 16, 2015 at 5:44 pm

    Reblogged this on georgeforfun.

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  • 13. Morgan  |  January 16, 2015 at 7:15 pm

    A YUMMY Friday Smile:) Blessings for a Joy-Full week end ~

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    • 14. words4jp  |  January 18, 2015 at 2:53 pm

      Thank you:) nothing like a tasty grilled cheese sandwich. 🙂

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  • 15. justme792  |  January 16, 2015 at 11:09 pm

    Aww, so sweet 😉

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  • 16. OK  |  January 17, 2015 at 3:48 pm

    This is too cute….very real.

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    • 17. words4jp  |  January 17, 2015 at 4:34 pm

      Thank you:)

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  • 18. MichelleMarie  |  January 18, 2015 at 6:59 am

    More cheese please! I like this! I love that you did this because he doesn’t like cheesy poetry!

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    • 19. words4jp  |  January 18, 2015 at 2:45 pm

      He is the king of cheesy poetry. He writes some if the cheesiest stuff. He wrote a love poem to me a few years ago in which he used the word goat!!!!

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